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Hi I'm Adam. Part time Film Maker, Full Time Anime Lover.

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Age Of The Brotherhood Delay/Re-Write

Posted by Milanous - January 8th, 2011


Well I might as well come out with it, there has been a substantial delay in the project. But the real question is why well to be honest I had written a script, done most of the lines and finished most of the part awaiting release. I sat down and watched it and to be honest, it was pile of shit. To much filler, another silly plot hole, which although intended to be answered like the rest of them, would only leave you more confused. Rise Of The Brotherhood was meant to set Age Of The Brotherhood up and part 2 just didn't continue the story without stalling even more.

You DON'T deserve something lackluster. There was more silly dialogue, which although character building can be saved for another time.
Also There was no Rina Chan, when you have one of the best VA's and a voicing icon of The Newgrounds you should use her, so I want to write her into the plot.
It felt rushed, for what i had planned. SPOILER.
Sonic is going to The Marble Zone and i realised you saw very little, no spiked traps or crushers that can't be done

It just was not good enough and I have decided to re-write it, hope this doesn't annoy my VA's.
It's re-written and ready to go. The fight scenes are complete and remain intact.

But I haven't been sitting around twiddling my thumbs like a 3D Realms employee, alot has been done, so it won't be too long now. I have some scenes if anyone would like to take a look.

You deserve better from the story and from me. So i hope you'll understand this.

~Milanous


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I hope it will be better as you'll expect it to be

i understand, but writing a story of course takes a lot of thinking,concentration and time

I guess I can wait a little longer... it is for the good of the series, so I accept your decision :)

Writing A Story Does Take A Lot Of Thinking And Concentration, Maybe You Should Get Someone To Write The Script For You, Even Though I Suck At Animating I'm Really Good At Making Up Stories, Before You Animate You Need A Good Story And Then Review It, To See If It Sounds Good.